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假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
注意： 词数不少于60.
提示词： 游乐园 amusement park
垃圾箱 bin
衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；请注意分段。
In 2004, six years after her graduated university, the country girl, candy, happily went to the big city.Throgh, she came to there several times, but she san into serious trouble. someone robbed her and hided her in a place where was 300 kilgram for away city. Finally, she esagped and she could only asked for help to the police if she was not willing to tell her parents. Candy at once got a point that had to find a job as soon as possible. after a few months, Candy has useded to earn by herself insted of her parents giving. Candy knew that she would have a better life, for her effect and English skill. because of robbing, she did not had any money at that time, so she learnt how to live.
