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2011安徽考试书面表达试题及答案

发布时间:2013-06-06 18:11浏览次数:3426[网页划词已开启]
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假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。

    注意: 词数不少于60.

    提示词: 游乐园   amusement park

                垃圾箱   bin


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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;请注意分段。

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In 2004, six years after her graduated, the country girl, Candy, happily went to the big city.Throgh, she came to the city several times, but she ran into serious trouble. She was robbed. Finally, she escaped and she could only asked for help to the police if she was not willing to tell her parents. Candy at once got a point that had to find a job as soon as possible. After a few months, Candy has used to earn by herself instead of her parents giving. Candy knew that she would have a better life, for her effect and English skill. Because of robbing, she did not have any money at that time, she learned how to alive.

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