2011安徽考试书面表达试题及答案

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Spring is a shiny and wonderful season, it always brings kinds of flowers and wakes up animals which are sleeping for a long time. In order to enjoy this amuzing view, my class has decied to have a activity which was spring outing. some students adviced to a amusement park, others wanted barbecue at the adge of river. at the end, we have decied to climb mountains. we had a good time at the sunny day. at first we were climbing mountains and were talking jokes thorgh the foresrt. But when we reached the top of the moutain, we found the rubbish all around everywere. throgh, we were all angry, but the teacher organized to pick up them and sent them to home. after a few hours, were tired and the envirement was very clean. we were prond of ourself.