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2011安徽考试书面表达试题及答案

发布时间:2013-06-06 18:11浏览次数:3428
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假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。

    注意: 词数不少于60.

    提示词: 游乐园   amusement park

                垃圾箱   bin


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文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;全文结构较为严谨;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误;请注意分段。

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Spring is a shiny and wonderful season, it always brings kinds of flowers and wakes up animals which are sleeping for a long time. In order to enjoy this amazing view, my class has decied to spent time outside which was spring outing. some students proposed to go to a amusement park, others wanted barbecue at the adage of the river. In the end, we have decided to climb mountains. through, At first we were climbing mountains and were talking jokes thorgh the foresrt, when we reached the top of the mountain, we found rubbish all around everywere. we were all angry, and then the teacher asked to pick up the rubbish and sent them to home. After a few hours, were tired and the environment was very clean. we were proud of ourself.

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