2011安徽考试书面表达试题及答案

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Spring is a shiny and wonderful season, it always brings kinds of flowers and wakes up animals which are sleeping for a long time. In order to enjoy this amazing view, my class has determined to spent time outside which was spring outing. Some students proposed to go to the amusement park, others wanted barbecue at the adage of the river. In the end, we have decided to climb mountains. We were climbing mountains and were talking when we were though the forest in the morning. While we had reached the top of the mountain, we found rubbish all around everywhere. We were all angry, and then the teacher asked to pick up the rubbish and sent them to home. After a few hours, we were tired and the rubbish were disappeared. Were very proud of ourselves and everybody enjoyed today.