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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；可以适当增加副词的使用。
It's well known that many students like using Internet, at the same time, different people have different views for using Internet. On one hand, some people agree students to use Internet, they think it's useful for students to make many friends who come from the world. And students can express their own opinions freely. What's more, it's beneficial for students to learn English. On the other hand, some people don't agree with it. They think it wastes students' time and affects studengs' study. What's worse, some students can be cheated by these on-line friends. As far as I'm concerned, as a student, we should use Internet to do some beneficial things. And we should use it to improve our English. If we can do it, I believe we'll be better and better.
