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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5751
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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文章学术词汇表达灵活,还要注意词汇拼写的检查;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;上下文衔接欠佳,文章层次欠清晰,建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累;请注意分段。

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the Impact of the Information Explosion Nowadays, we live in the time of information and technology explosion.The one who grasp information quickly and efficiently, could achieve much more opportunities than others. Just as the saying" A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention".The information shows the changes of events, as well as updates,reflecting the development trends and direction of things.Consequently, it plays important role in our life. What's more, it has made great impact on our life---both possitive and negtive. For the possitive aspect, a great deal of information make our life wonderful. We know what happened in the world at any moment.But on the negtive aspect, the greater amount of information means the more complecated environment of media.With conveniences information explosion bring, many incivilized and indelicated news also come. It may affect our attitude toward life,value and the world.

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