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the Impact of the Information Explosion Nowadays, we live in the time of information and technique explosion.Whoever grasp information quickly and efficiently, could achieve much more opportunities than others. Just as the saying" A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention".The information shows the changes of events, as well as updates,reflecting the development trends and direction of things.Consequently, it plays an important role in our life. What's more, it has made great impact on our life---both positive and negative. For the positive aspect, a great deal of information make our life wonderful. We know what happened in the world at any moment.But on the negtive aspect, the greater amount of information means the more complecated environment of media.With conveniences information explosion bring, many uncivilized and indelicate news also come. It may affect our attitude toward life，value and the world.
