2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

Wowadays,we can see that more and more goods be excessive packageed by some beautiful paper .the phenomenon can be listed as follows. For one thing,with the development of economy and improvement of people's living standard .people in mounting numbers have powerful purchase .so a lot of merchant have to think of more ways to attrac custumer's eyes than others by the excessive packaging on goods .However,some people like some brightful paper ,no care wether nice or not about goos . In my view , it is too waste our paper ,because many people bring them into home and then throw these pachage without hesitation. so we should overcome desire for purchase when we see beautiful package.