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Don't Be Afraid to Say"No" when someone need you give help.almost saituation we don't say"no",because we feel shame.but,what saituation where we will say"no".one is when our moode is law,we will more consider ourself . why someone don't say"no" when it is nessery?i think it is because we are afraid lost friend. as a human ,we must understand refuse.everyone have time but we need ourself time. so,don't be afraid to say"no"