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My views on Online shopping In recent years shopping online is become more and more popular,even it has becomes fashion. Some people think it is not a good thing.If we shopping online we don't know how it is really like.We maybe cheated. Furthermore the service of sell is very unconvenient. But others people have some different opinions.They can't agree with it any more.They think it is more convenient for us,we needn't go out and can buy so many things which we want.In addition shopping online is more cheaper than go into the store. As far as I am concerned I agree with the second opinion.After all, in my view shopping online its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.Now it is Internet time,shopping online can save more time for us.Of course we can ignore the dangerous of it,but I believe the law of shopping online will become more and more perfect in future. Thus enjoy it we will be happy.
