小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher My new teacher is Lan Meiqing.Lan's teacher is strict.She's very beautiful.I like Lan' teacher.My classmates are like Lan' teacher too.Because I math is improve.Her favourite season is spring.Her likes potatoes,I like potatoes,too.Because is tasty .Her is very like make prograss.I like i make prograss. You like my nwe teacher?