2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；没有能够有效地使用连接词和过渡词。

Nowadays,more and more people have their own computer.It's very important for people'daily life.We can do many things with it,for example, working,communicating and so on.We need it. Computer brings us great benefits to us.First, we can work or study with computer at home,it'very easy and convenient.Second, we can do shopping online so that save our time and energy.Third, we can listen to music and watch films to relax ourselves.But every coin has two sides,it also does great harm to us. When we use the computer all the time,it's very bad for our eyesight. Also, we will have no interests in study if we are aditioned to computer games.Besides,it affects our physical and mental health. As far as I am concerned, we should strike a balance with other things.We should make a full use of them.And we should use them to serve us and our life.In a word, their advantages should more than disadvantages is what we should.