可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;作者词汇表达不够灵活,拼写错误比较多;衔接成分很少出现,文章结构欠严谨;请注意分段;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用。
It is unwise that you get a conclusion depends on what you saw and heard.we should take a action to find the truth out by conmmunication .if we do everything just depend on you eyes and ears ,you will make many mistakes and misunderstand and have a deeper obstruct.practice is the sole criterion of testing rtue .
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