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作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
It's well known that many students like for using Internet, at the same time, different people have different views for using Internet. On the one hand, some people agree to use Internet, they think it's useful for students to make many friends who come from the world. And students can express their own opinions freely. What's more, it's beneficial for students to learn English. On the other hand, some people don't agree with it. They think it wastes students' time and affects students' study. What's worse, some students can be cheated by these on-line friends. As far as I'm concerned, as students, we should use Internet to do some beneficial things. And we should use it to improve our English. If we can do it, I believe we'll be better and better.
