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It is unwise that you get a conclusion depends on what you saw and heard.we should take action to find the truth out by communication.If we do everything just depend on you eyes and ears ,you will make mistakes and misunderstand and have a deepe obstruct.practice is the sole criterion for testing trueth .
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