文中学术词汇比较灵活,总体词汇表达贫乏,文中拼写错误稍多;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;衔接成分很少出现,文章结构欠严谨;请注意分段;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用。
It is unwise that you get a conclusion depends on what you saw and heard.we should take action to dicover the truth out by communication.If we do everything just depend on you eyes and ears ,you will make mistakes and misunderstand and have a deepe obstruct.practice is the sole criterion for testing truth .
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