文中学术词汇使用较丰富,词汇量积累仍然需要;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;衔接成分很少出现,文章结构欠严谨;请注意分段;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用。
It is unwise that you get a conclusion depends on what you saw and heard.we should take action to discover the truth out by communication.If we do everything just depend on you eyes and ears ,you will make mistakes and misunderstand and have a deepe obstruct.practice is the sole criterion for testing truth .
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