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Welcome to my hometown China.In china, the most beautiful city is Beijing,which is its capital,a center of trade and treating visitors from all over the world.Beijing is famous for the Great Wall,the Palace Museum and Winter palace,all of which have become heritage in the world.Now I am delighted to introduce the most interesting city in China. What stands before your eyes is its center of Beijing called Tian An Meng Square,in which many chrished antiques and renowned persons' photo such as Mao Zedong's are placed.What's more,there are so many sceans to visit.I think you will feel regretful for you if you don not have chance to walk on The Great Wall that was established by the ruler Qin dynasty. Another sightseeing spot is the allay called Hutong.Well a saying goes that 'it's meaningless if you do not go the Hutong though you come to China.'Hanging out in Hutong,you can perceive the soul of Beijing and its charming and misterous culture,especially the Beijing opera. Beijing is a city,whose beauty may be far beyond your expactation and it can surprise you much.
