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The Letter of Application! Hello! My name is Liumei,who is the chinese nationality, and the Han nationality.I am 22 years old.I was graduated from GuangZhou University.I want to go aboard follow a better education, so I choice this unverisity in America. Now,I enclose my report card in four years unversity and others certificates with you. Would you tell me when and how to apply visa? I want to know how much fuel in one year also,or acheive schoolership so on. By the way, could I need to pass some language test? Thanks and look forward to your reply!
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