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The Letter of Application! Hello! My name is Liumei,who is the chinese nationality, and the Han nationality.I am 22 years old.I was graduated from GuangZhou University.I want to go aboard then follow a better education, so I chose this univerisity in America. Now,I enclose my report card in four years university and others certificates with you. Would you tell me when and how to apply visa? I want to know how much fuel in one year also,or achieve scholarship so on. By the way, could I need to pass language test such as TOEFL or IELTS? Thanks and look forward to your reply!
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