小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend,she has a block eyesand long hair.I love she very much,bcause she will show up on time when i have in trouble.She likes singing song,she is a good gril,her study is very good and she likes help others that have a good fame in my claasroom,my teachers love she very much.