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Currently the public has paid great attention to the debate concerning whether it is wise or not to make friends online. Taking all the favorable and unfavorable aspects into account, I stand firmly on the side that we can benefit from making friends online. This point of perspective, I believe, shared by the largest proportion of the public, can be explained in the following tangible reasons. Firstly, communication is unquestionably regarded as an extremely important element in our society. Unfortunately, there are people around us appearing to be apathetic and have got no idea about how to make an acquaintance with a stranger. They may be too shy or afraid of being refused by others. But remember no man is an isolated island just for himself, and every man is a part of the continent, a part of the group. As a consequence, regardless of the fact that whether you like it or not, as individuals, we have to be part of the group. And, internet, as a mass medium, provides us with a chance. Things turn to be quite different because sitting in front of the computer screen, people who are scared to make friends online can talk with others more naturally and confidently. Secondly, it is well acknowledged that we can learn a lot from our e-pals. If our friends online were foreigners, we can practice English with them. What’s more, we can have a glimpse of general information of another country，such as the culture, the tradition, the custom and the geography. From what have mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that making friends online can do us some good. and communication online is having a greater impact on our daily life.
