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Some people would give suggestion for athers. Sometime it would be good, or be worst. For me, it s wrong choice to work wihout going university. For someone told me that it s waste time to go to the colleage. I such regret persent. So since then, I always think several times and ask for someone help before making a big dision. But everything has both of sides, sometimes it s good to make a dicesion auickly. In my opions, I think the impotant thing to make a chioce is following your heart, and you have to paper everything before you do it, no matter how it s improtant.