2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

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Some people would give some suggestions for others. Sometime it would neither be good or be worst. For me, it s wrong choice to work without continue education. For someone told me that it s waste time to go to the college. I have regreted persent.Since then, I always think several times and ask for someone help before making a big decision. But everything has both of the sides, it s good to make a dicesion quickly. In my opions, I think the impotant thing to make a choice is following your heart, and you have to paper everything before you do it, no matter how it s improtant.