2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用，注意文中的几处句子错误；请注意分段。

Some people would give some suggestions for others. Sometime it would neither be good or be worst.It s wrong choice to work when I was 16 without studying. For someone told me that it s waste time to go to college. Since then, I have always thought several times and asked for someone help before making a big decision. However, everything has both of the sides, sometimes it s good to make a decision quickly. In my opinion, the most important thing which makes a plan carefully before you do it, no matter how it s important.