小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher Today, I go to an English training schoolto improve my English. The teaching materials is New Concept Enlish .I ‘ve already learnt for a year .There are many friends such as Air, Susan ,Vivien ,Jo ,Kate ,Vickey ,Vate. Last year ,there was a good teacher .We called her Miss Guo .She is a student ,too. We liked her very much .But now , the teacher has changed .Miss Guo left us .Because she is so busy .I think the new teacher is wores than Miss Guo .Though she is Miss Guo’s classmates .The new class is quieter than begore .And there are much homework and exams .We don’t like it .We feel so disappointed.