2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A Beautiful City in China Whenever a foreign friend is coming to visit my great country,I deeply want to take him to Yunnan which city called the city of spring by us.The reason is simple . First at all,Yunnan is the very place to introduce a word.Which word?May you have guessed from the sentences above.Quite right ,is spring.Once I have came to there was my last summer holiday with my family.Only when we slipped on the land of Yunnan Kunming,we can hardly not to be amazed by the blue sky and white cloud.Thus is deep autumn,the city is