2010年考研英语作文真题:文化火锅，既美味又营养

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People are absorbed into a boom of culture assimilation launched by the reform and opening of China in the context of economics globalization.On the one hand,in spite of endless divisive issues of total and uncritical acceptance of it,culture integration do brings a new world that we had never seen before,such as railway close the gap with western countries.On the other hand,we benefit from learning the western custom reflected not only on the advanced technology,but on the daily life as well. A case in point is the electronic business,a product of study the foreign culture,offers you the opportunity to purchase commodity online instead of stepping outside your room.Last but not least.