2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；作者在句法层面做的很棒；文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇。

The drawing shows one man goes throng a stone while thinking there is the very place that other men have fallen down, therefore he get around it lest he would fall either. The picture implies a obstacle we all may encounter in our life. And old saying has it that wise men learn by other men’s mistakes——the trouble is，not every one knows how to survive in a society that is full of trap wisely. There is no clear-cut road for a young man emerging from college to travel on, but he can draw lessons from other men’s failure. Predecessors’ conclusion is one of the most valuable source of experience. In the first place, we can reduce the possibility of making mistakes,as well as improve our work efficiency. In the second place, it is learn from the experience, rather than follow other blindly, that inspire us to travel on. In a word, only if we learn from the failure and the past, can we develop ability and make a further progress.