2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；可适当增加几条从句。

The drawing shows one man goes through a stone while thinking there is the very place that other men have fallen down, therefore he gets around it, lest he would fall either. The picture implies there be an obstacle we all may encounter in our life. And old saying has it that wise men learn by other men’s mistakes——the trouble is，not every one knows how to survive in a society that is full of trap wisely. There is no clear-cut road for a young man emerging from college to travel on, but he can draw lessons from other men’s failure. Predecessors’ conclusion is one of the most valuable source of experience. In the first place, we can reduce the possibility of making mistakes,as well as improve our work efficiency. In the second place, it is learn from the experience, rather than follow other blindly, that inspire us to travel on. In a word, only if we learn from the failure and the past, can we develop our ability and make further progress.