2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者在句法层面做的很棒；拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用。

The drawing shows one man goes through a stone while thinking there is the very place The drawing shows one man goes through a stone while thinking there is the very place that other men have fallen down, therefore he gets around it, lest he would fall either. The picture implies there may be an obstacle we all encounter in our life. And old saying has it that wise men learn by other men’s mistakes——the trouble is，not every one knows how to survive in a society that is full of trap wisely. There is no clear-cut road for a young man emerging from college to travel on, but he can draw lessons from other men’s failure. Predecessors’ conclusion is one of the most valuable source of experience. In the first place, we can reduce the possibility of making mistakes,as well as improve our work efficiency. In the second place, it is learn from the experience, rather than follow other blindly, that inspire us to travel on. In a word, only if we learn from the failure and the past, can we develop our ability and make further progress.