小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher I had a good teacher a month ago .We called her Miss Guo.She taught my English .She is a student,too .She is very kind .So we liked her very much .But now ,everything has changed.She is so busy that she left us.We feel so disappointed. I am proud I have a good teacher.How nice it will be that Miss Guo comes back.