2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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Nowdays people who live in metropolitan cities feel that their living standards have been decreasing,althrough the economical condition have become better.we are likely to figure out the reasons and take some effective measures to tackle this problem. One main factor is the pollution of environment.if the environment remains in a dire state ,the quality of life could be compromised.people live in big cities would feel that they just live in densely populated place which is without fresh air and enough trees.there is a point that cannot be ignored is that pollution can cause a damage to people's health.for example,the bad air quality can lead to some respiratory dieases and people feel uncomfortable of it. Another reason is the high pressure.in this highly competitively society,everyone lives under much pressure and the pressure would lead to some mental problems.this means that it may be an adverse impact on people's psychological condition.for example,some employees of companies who live under stress usually work overtime,they have no adequate time to relieve themselves.stress has made it difficult to improve people's living standards. there are two approaches to solve this problem.environmentally friendly products should be announced and government can launch awareness campaigns for citizens.people also need to be aware of the importance of mental health. it is suggested that people to take more outdoor activities and do some aerobic exercises to reduce pressure.