2011年12月10日雅思写作真题:如何处理人与自然的关系

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In my opinion, protecting the environment and preserving the biodiversity would never be late. the awareness of human hold the key to the environmental protection. if everyone realise the importance of protection for environment and aware of the results of human activities, environmental problems can be tackled more effectively. in conclusion, people is likely to take measures with the technology and environmental commonsense.