文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;能够使用一些不错的从句。
With the society develops rapidly, people's thinking activities also become more quickly, such as making decisions. Although we usually say that the moves when it's necessary to make moves, before we really make decisions, we need think about it carefully. That is look before you leap. Some people may say that thinking too much will lose chance, and the decision maybe a fault, too. But in my opinion, whatever the decision is right or wrong, we must think it over first, then make it. Because making a decision as soon as seeing or listening something is must wrong, having no connection with the decision itself. So, before we make a decision, we must think it over, again and again, gather information about it, know detailed as much as possible, then make the decision. In this way, we will more possible to make a right dicision.
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