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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71661
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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We should take him go to BeiJing if my foreign friend is going to visit our hometown.The reasons can be liseted as follows: Firstly,BeiJing is our contry capital. I love the city ,not only it is important city with economy , culture and political in china,but also it have enormous snacks across our country.second,there are have more remarkable construction. For example ,the Forbidding City ,it is a great project and have a long time history.The Great Wall,which is a miracle for its exist. Finally,it is important to eat the delicious food for me. However,there have a lot of snack across our country. So,I must be take him to BeiJing .In my opinion,BeiJing is worth to visit for us.

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