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We should take him go to BeiJing if my foreign friend is going to visit our hometown.The reasons can be liseted as follows: Firstly,BeiJing is our contry capital. I love the city ,not only it is important city with economy , culture and political in china,but also it have enormous snacks across our country.second,there are have more remarkable construction. For example ,the Forbidding City ,it is a great project and have a long time history.The Great Wall,which is a miracle for its exist. Finally,it is important to eat the delicious food for me. However,there have a lot of snack across our country. So,I must be take him to BeiJing .In my opinion,BeiJing is worth to visit for us.
