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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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作者词汇基本功很好,在学术词汇方面希望能更熟练的使用复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

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Movie, a milestone in human’s history, was innovated in the early 20th century. Although people firstly considered movies as a novel toy that actually is not treated correctly in today’s view, the movies containing so abundant contents become gradually a significant part of people’s life. In the past, at the time when movies were first time delivered in front of their audiences, they used to display some familiar scenes or simple activities, such as a train travelling and approaching. With the development of the entire movie industry, a growing number of movie patterns started to take part through out the world. Those patterns, for example, a love story, and western films as well, hastily occupied people’s sight. In this situation, a huge number of film actors and directors were well accepted by the mass and become new celebrities. The same thing came to the movies. The western movies, describing some imaginative legend of a hero in the western American, had undoubtedly influence the whole generation in the US, during the 1930s to 1960s. This generation had the strongest emotion towards heroes who praise virtue and punish vice, resulting the explosion of comic heroes in Marvel and DC, the two tycoons in comic industry. The western films, also cultivated the Americanism, the thirst of the US citizens for democracy, freedom and equity, expressed in the saga everywhere. Thanks to these heroes on silver screen, a mount of folk heroes appear in daily life, and they devote themselves to helping those who are in danger of lives, countering evils and crimes. The film, Stagecoach, is one legend in legends. In the film tells a tale that eight gentles with a prostitute named Dallas, travels in a stagecoach, and then get beleaguered by the native Indians, and how they manage to be safe. Another pattern of movies that influence people most is the love story. In the most common cases, a gentleman with a beautiful lady, experiences a uncommon life that the majority have never a chance to live, and at last falls into the love with her, living a happy life in the end. In this kind of films, people can feel the feelings among the two lovers, how their emotional changes are like, and learn to behave alike the gentle or the lady. A well known love story film, as well as a disaster film, Titanic, is one representative of them. Jack, a handsome but poor guy, falls in the love of Rose, a rich beauty on the first trip of the Titanic. Unfortunately, the ship hit an iceberg, making them separate with each other, while Jack’s lose of his young life. However, one fragment is all the time to be imitated everywhere. When the lady stand on the deck with her arms stretching out by her sides, Jack hold her hands with the same pose, as if they are flying. Many couples are crazy about this scene and imitate it when taking wedding photos. Actually, love story movies show us how we could love, and how we should behave in front of our lovers. The impaction of this kind of film is taking part in our daily life, and we sometimes imitate the actions in the films unconsciously. Other types of films, although, are not as influential as the two types above, affect our behavior yet. For instance, science fictions develop the technology of space travel and robots, animation films tell us, especially kids, to be virtuous and intelligent, gangster movies teach us to hold guard against crimes. In conclusion, movies have already influenced we people’s behaviors, while we are watching the film, our value are shape at the same time. A good movie is also a good teacher, which could tell us what should be done, and what should never.

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