小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dog named DuDu in my family.It is a black and white on it,the eyes are big,the mouth is big,the ears is big,its four legs are short,it runs very slowly.It eats very much every day.It is too fat,It is 9 years old.I like it very much.It is my friend