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【题目要求】
Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day's work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.【题目分析】
这是个非常私人的问题。尽管很多人都喜欢睡懒觉，但是“早起的好处”应该更容易写一些。有益于健康，可以去锻炼身体。早上大脑经过休息，相对更加清醒，适合学习。可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
As a student,I prefer to get up early in the morning and start works of whole day.In my personality,I always can not stand waiting to see the sun of tomorrow when I go to sleep.I like the begining of the day just like I can make stories of mine.Maybe some chooses that bases on the benefits.I had been seen some the newspaper. First of all,if you get up early in the morning will grasp more time than others who go to bed more early than you.Time is treasure that everyone can not trade it by money.The early bird catches the worm. Secondly,as you get up early in the day instead of late,you can fresh your brain in adequate time so the whole works will be more effective done.Everything will be effective finished as enough plans. Thirdly,getting up late is a way of effects memory ability as well as make you more tired and keep low spirit.Also it maybe affects many aspects of physiology. So,getting up from your bed and go to see the sun of the day's beginng and breath the fresh air.It is a way of making you peace and like life.
