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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；有效的运用了一些复杂句；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
It is easy for us to see from the picture that using computers has become a common way to communicate between children and parents.However,is it necessary or normal? As for me,I believe that "each coin has two sides'',so does the computer.The reason for this is not far to seek.On the one hand,it is convenient for children to communicate with parents or others by using computers,and it is so fast that can save their time.On the other hand,it would do harm to children if they couldn't use it reasonable,for example,some children are addicted to playing computer games and surfing the Internet so that they pay no attention on their study.Therefore,children aren't supposed to communicate more with parents by using computers but they need to communicate face to face. I hold the opinion that it is more close for people to communicate face to face,and it's a better way to increase people's happiness.So,I think electronic communication can not replace face-to-face contact.
