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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
请作者在词汇丰富度，尤其是在学术词汇的积累上再接再厉；从句使用量太少；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；请注意分段。
From:hubin@163.com To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com I knew your new product named number 5670 which were disply in New York during the esbablishment from December 15th to 22nd. I am very interested in it and please send a price list and instruction to me. Thanks for your cooperation and i sincerely hope that we can establish business relationship. Sincerely, Hu Bin
