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From: wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date: December 23rd, 2008 To：sales-dpartment@homail.com Subject: check the product list Dear Mr.Johnson, We have recieved your 3,000 product on December 22nd, but according to our signing of No.35 order, we ought to have recieved3,500 produc and we want to know about the left of 500 prodct. Please check your product list and respond as soon as possible. We are looking forward to your early reply!Thanks! Yours, Wang Haiyang
