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I saw an old man and his grandson who was about 10 years old. The old man took a bag and a violin. I stood up, and asked the old man to take my seat. But the old man's grandson occupied the seat. The old man had to stand beside him. After a while, The boy asked for water loudly. After drinking water, he threw the empty bottle on the bus. I can't bear what the boy did. He should pay more respect to his grandpa, and take care of him. As a passenger, he behaved badly. Every passenger ought to keep the bus clean. I supposed the boy was very rude.
