2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

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The Way Success There is a saying goes,no pains,no gains.Following this,we can draw a conclusion that success is based on trying.And there is an old saying goes,attempt may be successful,but if you don't attempt that you can't get achievement.The following is my way that we can get success. First,the way of success is diligence.For example,Helen Keller,is a diligence person,who is blind but doesn't give up striving.Her diligence made her gain huge success.Second,target,all successful people have a target.They struggle for the aim all the time.It made them lead to the path of success.Last but not least,responsibility,they can take responsibility for themselves and their cause.It is necessary to be successful. To conclude,if we can do all these ,we will make our life enjoyable.That is to say,we have to struggle for success.The result will can add color to the dull routine of every day life. Something will make our life more enjoyable. Something can add color to the dull routine of everyday life.