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There is an old saying that to see is to believe.However,I don't think it is really true.As we all know ,sometimes what we see is not what it is.For example ,when we put the chopsticks into water,we see it looks like it become curse.But we know that it is not right.So,it is not wise to make decision when we just see it or hear it,we should know the whole thing and make the thorogh judgement. There are many examples to prove that we should just believe what we see or what we hear.For example the relationship between lovers,many couples would argue with each other,the most common reason is that they are not believe each other,especially when the girl or the boy finds that their boyfriend or girlfriend were staying with other guys.,they would become so angry and maybe will give a big fight even break up with their couple.But what they see is not what they see.We should believe that our eyes always cheat us So it is very unwise to make some decisions when we just see some part of it or hear part of it.
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