2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer and Man As we all know ,with the development of the technology,computer has become one of the necessary part in our daily life. Of course,computer like a two sides sower,when it takes numberous convience for us ,for example, we can communicate with our relivates quickly,search informations we need ,howerer ,at the same time ,we must relize that computer can help you ,certainly ,it can hurt you .In order to maintain computer's advantages and hide its disadvantage ,all of our computerman should do our best to control our own behivors .