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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Due Attention Should Be Given To the Study of Chinese In recent years,there has appeared a state which is students happen to overlooking the study of Chinese. Firstly,it is boring for students to learn such long article.Students won't like to learn those articles because it is hard to understand.Secondly,most students and their parents are more interested in being good at English than Chinese.It is hot to get abroad.They think it flourish their life by learning well English. Overlooking Chinese learning is a horrible fact for us.It will make students to an unknown world of China.Students don't know anyting about our country which involing our culture,tradition,history.They use well in English and don't know how to use their mother tongue. In my opinion,we should pay more attention to the study of Chinese.We can use some measures to get more students learning Chinese,such as add more scores in Chinese project.It is neccessery for sutdents to learn well Chinese.
