2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My friend Mark will come to China to visited my hometown who is come from The USA.I know he likes the culture of China. So i want to take him to visited the QINBINMAYONG reborila. Because it's the symbol of SHANXI prince what's more it the interstingplace of China . I need prepare to look forword him. i also will take him to my shool that him konw what ’s the univestity of china. i think him will be very happy to there.