2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇丰富度要加强；全文结构较为严谨；若注意部分错误，文章会更漂亮。

Taking a look around,we was surrounded by all sorts of news which may be wrong or misled.This is exactly what someone once predicted,"the real danger is not that the computer will begin to think like man,but that man will begin to think like the computer."We should take it seriously. Apparently,it is danger that we draw the conclusion immediately without deliberate consideration.In China,the government fails to restrain netizen to make comments on online,in which case contribute to the environment is danger and unsafe.Additionally,we unable to distinguish the news whether true or not so that we may be misled by the information that we got it from internet. Internet,for my perspective,make our world a village and make convenient to our life.However,it is improtant that we enhance our horizens and improve our ability to evaluate the information.Only can we do it ,we can make use of computer in rational manner.